So, I have no idea about this. I wrote this last night, first thing I've written in a long time. So I don't know if I like it yet at all... But I'm thinking if I do, that it could be part of a longer story about a person, just sort of her story, her life, her reflections. And this could be. Perhaps not the very beginning. But a section. Early on. I have something else I half wrote, that connects to this. Anyway, thoughts? Do I need more practice before I can churn out something decent again? Or is it passable? And what about the continuation of it? :)
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Tuesday, June 8, 2010
This started out as just a silly comment to my sister on Facebook. I did really like it though, but didn't really have anywhere to go with it... So, here's my attempt at turning it into poetry...
Our home fades colder
Every day without you...
Lovelorn and lacklustre,
The spiders spin shadows in the dark of this dying house.
Emptiness piles higher,
Higher, in the corners -
chokes the last breath
Vestiges fading, trailing, torn,
tattered curtains silent to the floor -
Listless mourners, these sentinels.
Watching in sorrow.
Decaying with it all.
Are we trapped in it yet, in these frozen depths?
Corpses of the sea -
Come back and save us. For the stillness grows.
Thursday, January 14, 2010
Well, head on over to sunshine on a rainy day. Miss Rachie is one of the loveliest, not too mention most talented people I have ever had the joy to know, and her writing is absolutely stunning. So is her artwork, but that's another story. It is her personality that shines the most, however, and I am very blessed to have her as a friend. Please take a look. :)